Commission - Sockjuice + LinoleumItalics

The shading is fine. I love it because it's warm and soft. But here goes my critique about the whole drawing:
The horn should be around their front head, and you put them in their heads. The right side girl's hand is too thick for its perspective, it should be a little more flat. As for the fingers, they look like they're sinking in each others metacarpals, what you have to look is that the fingers land over a plane surface and they keep their size; the only thing that will obstruct in the way in that perspective is the knuckle.

I hope this critique is useful for you and you don't take it the wrong way. The drawing is nice, calm and warm because of its shading, but you know that you will never get compliments from me. They're always either comments or critiques.

Keep on the great job. ♥